The college application essay has long been a valuable part of the admissions review process. Right behind academic performance which includes grades, rigor of curriculum and test scores, the essay(s) continue to be important. While this importance varies by the college you apply to, it is typically given more attention by private colleges. With many colleges becoming Test-Optional for the 2020-21 application cycle and beyond, the essay will most likely get more attention than in previous years.
Some colleges simply require the common application personal statement, but many require supplemental essays tailored specifically to them as well. By now, almost all colleges have confirmed their supplemental essay topics, and the common application and coalition application prompts are out and ready to be tackled. Depending on your list of schools, you will most likely need to write more than one essay. So, if you have not gotten started by now, it is time! Here are my tips to kick off your personal statement:
Don't Focus on the Prompt – For the personal statement, think about YOUR story or something you really want to share and it will most likely fit. Don't forget there is always the Topic of Your Choice if what you end up choosing does not truly fit a prompt.
Be YOU – The goal is to help admissions get to know you and pretending to be someone you are not or someone you think they want you to be is not helping anyone. This is your chance to share something about you that can not be found anywhere else in the application or something that is really significant to you.
Start EARLY – The essay topics are out, why not begin now? For many students, the idea of sitting down to write such an important essay (or maybe any essay at all) seems daunting. However, delaying it is not going to make it any better. Starting early not only gives you more opportunity to write a quality essay, it also gives you time to really consider what you want to share with admissions. Some students end up writing several entirely different essays before they arrive at ‘the one’ they are happy with, and that takes TIME.
Brainstorm – You may have an idea or two in mind when you take a quick glance at the prompts, but it is time to dig deeper. Doing some excellent brainstorming activities can be really helpful for coming up with a good focus for your essay. I highly recommend the exercises from Ethan Sawyer, The College Essay Guy. His Essence Objects and Values exercises are great. If you are still drawing a blank, take a few days off and come back to it. But sometimes it takes actually sitting down and writing the first draft before you realize the essay topic will or won’t work. While it isn’t ideal, it is better to get rid of it before you spend too much time trying to make it into something it just can’t be.
Make it Personal and Entertaining – You want the readers to remember you after your essay and be able to connect you with YOUR story. You also want them to want to finish reading it. Give them details, use adjectives, don’t be repetitive, dig deep and you will be fine. Admissions readers get many essays on the same topic and sometimes on the most mundane subjects, but the way they were written turned them into something special. Ask anyone in admissions what their favorite essays were about and you may be surprised.
Get Feedback but not too Much - It is definitely a good idea to have someone read over your essay to check for grammatical errors and get an overall opinion. However, do not forget this is YOUR essay. Sometimes getting too many opinions ends up leaving you more confused than helped. Ask someone you trust for an honest opinion, triple check your grammar and be done!
Need some inspiration? There are many ‘successful’ essays out there for you to read. Take a look at a few of them and maybe it will spark an idea. Just remember, it is about YOU.
Resources:
https://www.collegeessayguy.com/blog/college-essay-examples
https://essaysthatworked.com/colleges?opt-out=true
https://apply.jhu.edu/application-process/essays-that-worked/
https://admissions.tufts.edu/apply/advice/past-essays/common-application-essays/
https://www.collegeessayguy.com/personal-statement
https://www.youtube.com/watch?time_continue=4&v=ZF4DErhsLvQ&feature=emb_logo